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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence correct????

This disanalogy arises because, despite similarities between gender and race, feminism and antiracism each impose distinctive requirements on how an ameliorative account of gender and an ameliorative account of race ought to be constructed.
  

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At the least, you could shorten it; it is exhausting to read. This disanalogy arises because, despite similarities between gender and race, feminism and antiracism impose distinctive requirements on how ameliorative accounts of gender and of race ought to be constructed.

— Mister Micawber

  • At the least, you could shorten it; it is exhausting to read.
  • This disanalogy arises because, despite similarities between gender and race, feminism and antiracism impose distinctive requirements on how ameliorative accounts of gender and of race ought to be constructed.
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At the least, you could shorten it; it is exhausting to read.

This disanalogy arises because, despite similarities between gender and race, feminism and antiracism impose distinctive requirements on how ameliorative accounts of gender and of race ought to be constructed.
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break it up into different sentences? can't lose any content i'm afraid
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Yes, you can—I've just done it for you.
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