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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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is this sentence correct?
This sentence is regarding a historical conflict:
In other words, the aversion of the two groups to each other had accelerated due to the fact that Catholics and Protestants, who had had a history of conflict, had to coexist.
thanks in advance
In other words, the aversion of the two groups to each other had accelerated due to the fact that Catholics and Protestants, who had had a history of conflict, had to coexist.
thanks in advance
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Anonymous I s this sentence correct? Yes, though it has a lot of "had"s. Also, note that you can write the mutual aversion of the two groups instead of the aversion of the two groups to each other .
- Anonymous I s this sentence correct?
- Yes, though it has a lot of "had"s.
- Also, note that you can write the mutual aversion of the two groups instead of the aversion of the two groups to each other .
- That change might make the sentence a bit smoother and more elegant.
- CJ
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Anonymous Is this sentence correct?Yes, though it has a lot of "had"s.
Also, note that you can write the mutual aversion of the two groups instead of the aversion of the two groups to each other. That change might make the sentence a bit smoother and more elegant.
CJ
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