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Pakee Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

The food was jejune and unfeeling; the catering quality was tendentious to be unprepossessing and slightingly toward the gourmets of French cuisine.
  

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No, it isn't correct. The vocabulary is inappropriate and the grammar wrong. It has almost no comprehensible meaning.

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  • It has almost no comprehensible meaning.
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No, it isn't correct. The vocabulary is inappropriate and the grammar wrong. It has almost no comprehensible meaning.

Try to write what you want to say in much simpler words. We'll try to suggest more 'sophisticated' versions.
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thanks, I tried to change the previous sentence, so here it is

The food was banal and without a spark; the service tended to be unprepossessing and neglectful to the gourmets of French cuisine.

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