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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence correct?
Hi!
After writing this sentence, i'm afraid it looks and sounds a bit clunky:
"...this was driven by his seeing of a drop of blood under a microscope."
Is it wrong?
Thank you!
After writing this sentence, i'm afraid it looks and sounds a bit clunky:
"...this was driven by his seeing of a drop of blood under a microscope."
Is it wrong?
Thank you!
Top answer
Omit 'of a'.
- Omit 'of a'.
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I changed it to this
"This was driven by seeing a drop of blood under a microscope."
Better?
"This was driven by seeing a drop of blood under a microscope."
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