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W415384914 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

One has to spend years working hard to develop his talent and then get a lot of fame.
  

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Say one's , not his. then get a lot of fame i s clumsy English. Say eg One has to spend years working hard to develop one's talent and gain fame.

— Clive

  • Say one's , not his.
  • then get a lot of fame i s clumsy English.
  • Say eg One has to spend years working hard to develop one's talent and gain fame.
  • Clive
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Say one's, not his.


then get a lot of fame is clumsy English.


Say

eg One has to spend years working hard to develop one's talent and gain fame.


Cliv
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What is the clumsy English?
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I already told you.


then get a lot of fame is clumsy English.


Instead, say eg then become famous.
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My dream is to gain fame
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