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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

As per our discussion at last meeting held in your office regarding the above subject, we are ready for the hand over inspection on April 18, 2014 at 10.00 hrs.
  

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Most of your sentence is wasted breath—your recipient already knows that! And omit the year if it is obvious: As discussed, we are ready for the handover inspection on April 18 at 10:00 AM.

  • Most of your sentence is wasted breath—your recipient already knows that!
  • And omit the year if it is obvious: As discussed, we are ready for the handover inspection on April 18 at 10:00 AM.
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Most of your sentence is wasted breath—your recipient already knows that! And omit the year if it is obvious:

As discussed, we are ready for the handover inspection on April 18 at 10:00 AM.

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