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Does this sentence sound correct and should I change the semicolon to a colon? After Faros took command of the combined rebels, a new minotaur warrior joined his ranks; the son of the recently slain Hotak, Bastion, who was thought to have been lost at sea.
  

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After Faros took command of the combined rebels, a new minotaur warrior joined their rank s, th e son of the recently slain Hotak, Bastion, who was thought to have been lost at sea.

  • After Faros took command of the combined rebels, a new minotaur warrior joined their rank s, th e son of the recently slain Hotak, Bastion, who was thought to have been lost at sea.
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After Faros took command of the combined rebels, a new minotaur warrior joined their ranks, the son of the recently slain Hotak, Bastion, who was thought to have been lost at sea.

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