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Vibhanu Posted 14 years ago
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If the knowledge of all covered topics was not tested, it would be great for all of us, if we knew the exact chapters that would be tested tomorrow
  

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Too many 'if's in one sentence; it is also a bit verbose. If all the covered topics were not tested, it would be great for us. It would be great if we knew the chapters that would be tested tomorrow.

— Mister Micawber

  • Too many 'if's in one sentence; it is also a bit verbose.
  • If all the covered topics were not tested, it would be great for us.
  • It would be great if we knew the chapters that would be tested tomorrow.
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Too many 'if's in one sentence; it is also a bit verbose.

If all the covered topics were not tested, it would be great for us. It would be great if we knew the chapters that would be tested tomorrow.
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