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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Sentence: I wish you also do the same, so that I become hopeful about the future of your company from my present critical stand.

Question: Is the sentence correct grammatically?

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Hi, It's stilted, and has some problems. I suggest eg I hope you do the same, so that I can become hopeful about the future of your company and change my present critical stance. This is still not wonderful, but it's hard to comment further with no context.

— Clive

  • Hi, It's stilted, and has some problems.
  • I suggest eg I hope you do the same, so that I can become hopeful about the future of your company and change my present critical stance.
  • This is still not wonderful, but it's hard to comment further with no context.
  • Cliv e
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Hi,

It's stilted, and has some problems.

I suggest
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I hope you do the same, so that I can become hopeful about the future of your company and change my present critical stance.
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CliveHi,It's stilted, and has some problems.I suggestegI hope you do the same, so that I can become hopeful about the future of your company and change my present critical stance.This is still not wonderful, but it's hard to comment further with no context.Clive
Thanks Clive for the answer. I would like to be in that way, I mean in formal way
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Hi,

I would like to be in that way, I mean in formal way It is just an email exchange . I was concerned about the grammar, the c
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