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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Comma365 wishes the living legend and arguably the father of post-modern literature, Haruki Murakami, the world's best to win the Nobel.
  

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It's a little awkward and a run-on sentence. I would say: Haruki Murakami is a living legend and arguably considered the father of post-modern literature. Comma365 believes he is the worlds best and hopes he wins the Nobel Prize for literature.

  • It's a little awkward and a run-on sentence.
  • I would say: Haruki Murakami is a living legend and arguably considered the father of post-modern literature.
  • Comma365 believes he is the worlds best and hopes he wins the Nobel Prize for literature.
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It's a little awkward and a run-on sentence. I would say:
Haruki Murakami is a living legend and arguably considered the father of post-modern literature. Comma365 believes he is the worlds best and hopes he wins the Nobel Prize for literature.

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