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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?
Objective : To work in a reputed organization that provides me with the opportunity to learn, grow, innovate and constantly challenge myself towards a whole new level of excellence so that I always keep striving to outperform myself.
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It is overly hyperbolic. You could at least eliminate the last bit: Objective: To work in a reputed organization that provides me with the opportunity to learn, grow, innovate and constantly challenge myself to reach a whole new level of excellence.
- It is overly hyperbolic.
- You could at least eliminate the last bit: Objective: To work in a reputed organization that provides me with the opportunity to learn, grow, innovate and constantly challenge myself to reach a whole new level of excellence.
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It is overly hyperbolic. You could at least eliminate the last bit:
Objective: To work in a reputed organization that provides me with the opportunity to learn, grow, innovate and constantly challenge myself to reach a whole new level of excellence.
Objective: To work in a reputed organization that provides me with the opportunity to learn, grow, innovate and constantly challenge myself to reach a whole new level of excellence.
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Hi,
If I read this as an employer, my first reaction would be
This person does not care about my business. He only cares about himself.
If I read this as an employer, my first reaction would be
This person does not care about my business. He only cares about himself.
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