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Creativeguru Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

The canal flowing amidst the green pasture provides
the ultimate experience of a golfing vacation
  

Top answer

It needs a full stop to make it correct. Canals don't normally flow like streams and rivers do. I'd change a midst to through .

— Rover_KE

  • It needs a full stop to make it correct.
  • Canals don't normally flow like streams and rivers do.
  • I'd change a midst to through .
  • I think it would take more than that to provide 'the ultimate experience of a golfing vacation'.
  • Rover
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It needs a full stop to make it correct.

Canals don't normally flow like streams and rivers do.

I'd change amidst to through.

I think it would take more than that to provide 'the ultimate experience of a golfing vacation'.

Rover
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