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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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We could see only a pump installed in the jacuzzi through the access panel as the Jacuzzi was fully clad with the marble, so we do not know further details of its brand name and other parts.
  

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I would rather rephrase it as "We could see a pump installed in the jacuzzi through the access panel and since the jacuzzi was marble cladded we are unaware of the brand and parts details of the pump. "

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  • I would rather rephrase it as "We could see a pump installed in the jacuzzi through the access panel and since the jacuzzi was marble cladded we are unaware of the brand and parts details of the pump.
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I would rather rephrase it as "We could see a pump installed in the jacuzzi through the access panel and since the jacuzzi was marble cladded we are unaware of the brand and parts details of the pump. "
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