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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

Sentence: After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for holidays, now comes the another revelation that both used to call each other night.

Question:Please scrutinize this setence and tell me is it correct grammatically? If something is wrong in it, try correcting it through a small change without altering the whole sentence Emotion: smile

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Hi, Sentence: After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for holidays, now comes the another revelation that both used to call each other night. After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for a holiday, now comes -- the -- another revelation that they used to call each other every night. Question: Please scrutinize this setence and tell me is it correct grammatically?

— Clive

  • Hi, Sentence: After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for holidays, now comes the another revelation that both used to call each other night.
  • After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for a holiday, now comes -- the -- another revelation that they used to call each other every night.
  • Question: Please scrutinize this setence and tell me is it correct grammatically?
  • If something is wrong in it, try correcting it through a small change without altering the whole sentence Clive
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Hi,

Sentence:After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for holidays, now comes the another revelation that both used to call each other night.

After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for a holiday, now comes -- the -- another revelation that they
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CliveHi,
Sentence:After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for holidays, now comes the another revelation that both used to call each other night.
After the revelation that Joe and Jolly went to Italy together for a holiday, now comes the another revelation that they used to call each other every night.

Question: Ple
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Hi,

"they used to do miss call to each other at night"

I can't comment, because I don't know at all what you are trying to say here.

Please explain your meaning some other way.

Clive
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CliveHi,
"they used to do miss call to each other at night"

I can't comment, because I don't know at all what you are trying to say here.
Please explain your meaning some other way.

Clive
No, but just check the grammar in it. Please
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I agree with Clive: it is impossible to understand what you mean. Do you mean this?--

They used to miss each other's calls every night
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