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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

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As per your forwarder that there is no fast boat ship from HK next week, therefore, we suggest change to the other carrier instead of use slow boat to avoid delay shipment. Besides, shall we come to your office collect the cheque tomorrow.
  

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Your forwarder says that there is no fast boat from HK next week . Therefore , we suggest you change to another carrier to avoid a shipment delay . Also, we will come to your office to collect the cheque tomorrow.

  • Your forwarder says that there is no fast boat from HK next week .
  • Therefore , we suggest you change to another carrier to avoid a shipment delay .
  • Also, we will come to your office to collect the cheque tomorrow.
  • If you do not start using the corrections I have made in your future posts, I will stop helping you.
  • I am very tired of correcting the same mistakes.
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Your forwarder says that there is no fast boat from HK next week. Therefore, we suggest you change to another carrier to avoid a shipment delay. Also, we will come to your office to collect the cheque tomorrow.

If you do not start using the corrections I have made in your future posts, I will stop helping you.
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Sorry teacher, I will correct my bad habit. Thank you so much for your correction

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