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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Per our on-site QC advice, you did not rework the goods, shipment quantity is still lacking; even shipping mark have not yet corrected. Please follow up closely and advise us the 3rd inspection schedule by return.
  

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Hi, Per our on-site QC advice, you did not rework the goods, shipment quantity is still lacking; even shipping mark have not yet corrected. Please follow up closely and advise us the 3rd inspection schedule by return. Generally speaking, avoid using semi-colons in this kind of business communication.

— Clive

  • Hi, Per our on-site QC advice, you did not rework the goods, shipment quantity is still lacking; even shipping mark have not yet corrected.
  • Please follow up closely and advise us the 3rd inspection schedule by return.
  • Generally speaking, avoid using semi-colons in this kind of business communication.
  • Despite our on-site QC advice, you did not rework the goods.
  • Shipment quantity is still lacking.
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Hi,
Per our on-site QC advice, you did not rework the goods, shipment quantity is still lacking; even shipping mark have not yet corrected. Please follow up closely and advise us the 3rd inspection schedule by return.

Generally speaking, avoid using semi-colons in this kind of business communication.
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Hi teacher,

Thank you so much for your correction and reminder. Thanks a lot !
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