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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Thanks for considering me for this position and I'm looking forward to working with the company.
Please keep me posted on the progress of this.

Thanks in advance!
  

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" Since you don't have the job yet, I wouldn't say you look forward to working with the company. You look forward to the opportunity to work for the company. You would be so pleased if you were to receive a position at the company.

— Englishmaven

  • " Since you don't have the job yet, I wouldn't say you look forward to working with the company.
  • You look forward to the opportunity to work for the company.
  • You would be so pleased if you were to receive a position at the company.
  • Thank you for considering me for this position; I am looking forward to the opportunity to work for your company.
  • I would appreciate it if you would keep me posted regarding this position.
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In a letter of application or a letter of follow-up, I would say "thank you" rather than "thanks." Since you don't have the job yet, I wouldn't say you look forward to working with the company. You look forward to the opportunity to work for the company. You would be so pleased if you were to receive a position at the company.

Thank you for considering me for this position; I am looking
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