0
Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Shall we use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air shipment, we shall show the notify party to your broker which will not have any problem. As the air freight from our forwarder is more cheaper which can help the factory to save air cost.
  

Top answer

I have underlined some problems: Shall we use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air shipment, we shall show the notify party to your broker which will not have any problem. As the air freight from our forwarder is more cheaper which can help the factory to save air cost.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems: Shall we use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air shipment, we shall show the notify party to your broker which will not have any problem.
  • As the air freight from our forwarder is more cheaper which can help the factory to save air cost.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
I have underlined some problems:

Shall we use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air shipment, we shall show the notify party to your broker which will not have any problem. As the air freight from our forwarder is more cheaper which can help the factory to save air cost.
0
0
Please review again my revision, thanks




We will use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air goods. There will not have any problem as the notify party on the document will be shown your broker same as before. Because the air freight rate by our forwarder is reasonable which can help the factory to save air cost.
0
0
We will use our air forwarder instead of yours for the air goods. There will not be any problem, because the party to be notified on the document will be shown as your broker, the same as before. Our forwarder's air freight rate is reasonable, which will help the factory to save freight costs.
0

Related Questions