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Lisicong Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is this sentence correct?

Officials damage the social system and benefits in order to protecting their official position or advancement. In this background, social disorder is the conditon of losing control and 'a state which cannot be managed'.

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The first sentence is almost correct. " In this background Against this background / In this connection I'd say, ". .

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  • The first sentence is almost correct.
  • " In this background Against this background / In this connection I'd say, ".
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  • " Or do you mean to define social disorder as "the condition of losing control"?
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The first sentence is almost correct. The infinitive should be "in order to protect their etc."

In this background Against this background / In this connection

I'd say, ". . . . , social disorder and a state which cannot be managed are the likely results of losing control."

Or do you mean to define social disorder as "the conditio
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