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Lisicong Posted 16 years ago
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For several thousands of years, when the day which means the end of the old year and starting a new year coming, harding working people offered sacrifice to gods and anceters.
  

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For several thousand years , when the day marking the end of the old year a nd the beginning of the new year came , hard-working people offered sacrifices to the gods and their ancestors.

  • For several thousand years , when the day marking the end of the old year a nd the beginning of the new year came , hard-working people offered sacrifices to the gods and their ancestors.
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For several thousand years, when the day marking the end of the old year and the beginning of the new year came, hard-working people offered sacrifices to the gods and their ancestors.

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