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M131294 Posted 16 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

Adolescents tend to have their own perceptions of what they want their bodies to look like and with the media's influence the development of eating disorders arises.
  

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Adolescents tend to have their own perceptions of what they want their bodies to look like and with the media's influence the development of eating disorders arises. Yes, the sentence is correct. Personally, I'd use a comma between the main clauses.

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  • Adolescents tend to have their own perceptions of what they want their bodies to look like and with the media's influence the development of eating disorders arises.
  • Yes, the sentence is correct.
  • Personally, I'd use a comma between the main clauses.
  • The subordinate clause doesn't really need one.
  • I have a logic problem.
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Adolescents tend to have their own perceptions of what they want their bodies to look like and with the media's influence the development of eating disorders arises.

Yes, the sentence is correct.
Personally, I'd use a comma between the main clauses. The subordinate clause doesn't really need one.

I have a logic probl
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