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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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As per your verbally / verbal advised that the goods will be started mass production on 13 July in ABC factory. However, per Mr. Chan, the mass production date is planned to start on 20 July. Please double check and confirm for our arrangement.
  

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Hi, Here are a few comments. You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office. I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't.

  • Hi, Here are a few comments.
  • You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office.
  • I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't.
  • Yet you never thank us,except for the times that I remind you that you never say 'thank you'.
  • You never seem to learn from our corrections.
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Hi,



Here are a few comments.



You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office.



I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't. Yet you never thank us,except for the times that I remind you that you never say 'thank you'.



You never seem to learn from our corrections. Y

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