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IMDJ Posted 16 years ago
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As we disscussed over the phone on the above subject. We are planinng to move the container from your permises to our new site at [place] any time during next week. So, kindly make necessary arrangements and instruct your site represent to release the above container as formally
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As we discussed over the phone , on the above subject. we are planning to move the container from your premises to our new site at [place] some time during next week. So, please make necessary arrangements and instruct your site represent [?
- As we discussed over the phone , on the above subject.
- we are planning to move the container from your premises to our new site at [place] some time during next week.
- So, please make necessary arrangements and instruct your site represent [?
- ] to release the above container as formally ["as formally" makes no sense by itself in this position, and the sentence seems to end abruptly.
- I'm not clear what you are trying to say.
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As we discussed over the phone, on the above subject. we are planning to move the container from your premises to our new site at [place] some time during next week. So, please make necessary arrangements and instruct your site represent [? Do you mean "site representative"?] to release the above container as formall
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