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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

We noted you accepted the deduct the handling cost of USD250.00 from your invoice (invoice no. xxx), but there is still one invoice need to be deducted. Please find the following breakdown for your reference.
  

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Hi, In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office. I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping. When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.

  • Hi, In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office.
  • I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping.
  • When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.
  • If you want to write and post some such sentences, I'd be happy to discuss them with you and to help you the best I can.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office.

I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping. When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.

If you want to write and post some such sen
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Hi Clive,



Message noted. I would like to rewrite the sentence. Please review and correct me when you have time. Thanks



There are two handling costs of USD250 each need to be deducted, please find the following breakdown for your reference.
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Hi,

There are two handling costs of USD250 each which need to be deducted. Please find the following breakdown for your reference.



Clive
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