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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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This is required for the online inspection, please provide us the actual mass production date and the factory address for us to perform the inspection
  

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An online inspection is required. Please provide us the actual mass production start date and the factory address so that we can perform the inspection .

— Mister Micawber

  • An online inspection is required.
  • Please provide us the actual mass production start date and the factory address so that we can perform the inspection .
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An online inspection is required. Please provide us the actual mass production start date and the factory address so that we can perform the inspection.
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Hi,

I advised you, I think yesterday, that you have a habit of incorrectly joining two sentences together when the second one starts with 'please'. Please allow me to remind you about this.



Best wishes, Clive
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