Is this sentence correct?

Hi,

We confirmed receipt your payment today with thanks. However, we are unable catch the vessel closing today and shall ship by next vessel. We shall keep you the vessel details ASAP.

I have marked in bold the parts that are not correct, so that you can try to reword them.

Clive

Hi Clive,

This is my revision :

We confirmed receipt your payment today with thanks. However, we are unable meet / fulfill vessel closing today and shall ship them by next vessel. We shall kept you the vessel details ASAP.

Please review and help me again. Thank you

Hi,

This is my revision :

We confirmed receipt your payment today with thanks. However, we are unable meet / fulfill vessel closing today and shall ship them by next vessel. We shall kept you the vessel details ASAP.

Please review and help me again.

It's better.



We confirmed receipt of your payment today with thanks.

Hi Clive,

My meaning for the last sentence is : We will / shall advise the customer for the next vessel schedule.

I would like to revise it again, please review again and correct me if you have time.

We shall keep you the next vessel schedule ASAP.

Thank you so much!

Hi,

My meaning for the last sentence is : We will / shall advise the customer of for the next vessel schedule.

I would like to revise it again, please review again and correct me if you have time.

We shall keep you the next vessel schedule ASAP.

Don't say 'keep', it's not correct. Use 'advise', as you did above.



Cli

Thanks Clive