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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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After pushing the factory we get an improved schedule and would like suggest them ship by full container for your cost saving. Please find the following plan and advise if accept.
  

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Hi, After pushing the factory we get an improved schedule and would like suggest them ship by full container for your cost saving. Please find the following plan and advise if accept. After pressuring the factory we have recieved an improved schedule and would like suggest to them that they ship by full container for your cost saving.

— Clive

  • Hi, After pushing the factory we get an improved schedule and would like suggest them ship by full container for your cost saving.
  • Please find the following plan and advise if accept.
  • After pressuring the factory we have recieved an improved schedule and would like suggest to them that they ship by full container for your cost saving.
  • ) and advise if acceptable.
  • We are asked to correct huge numbers of these sentences about shipping.
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Hi,

After pushing the factory we get an improved schedule and would like suggest them ship by full container for your cost saving. Please find the following plan and advise if accept.

After pressuring the factory we have recieved an improved schedule and would like suggest to them that they ship by full container for your cost saving. Please find the attached plan (schedule?) an
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Clive
We are asked to correct huge numbers of these sentences about shipping. I could be wrong, but they all seem to be from the same office. If so, may I ask if your office has ever considered hiring an employee who has good English?




Best wishes, Clive


I agree. You can tell by the style that it is the same person.
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Wow! I always thought it was the teacher's fault for giving all these boring repetitious assignments!Emotion: surprise
(Shipping 101 ?)
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