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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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We will perform the inspection for two shipments of D568 on January 15th as request. Please keep them in good condition, both of them to be shipped by the end of February.
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We will perform the inspection of two shipments of D568 on January 15th as requested. Please ensure they remain in good condition, both to be shipped by the end of February. (Do you mean that after the inspection, there should be no changes or additions to the shipments - in which case you might say "Please ensure that the shipments remain in the same condition prior to them being shipped by the end of February")
- We will perform the inspection of two shipments of D568 on January 15th as requested.
- Please ensure they remain in good condition, both to be shipped by the end of February.
- (Do you mean that after the inspection, there should be no changes or additions to the shipments - in which case you might say "Please ensure that the shipments remain in the same condition prior to them being shipped by the end of February")
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We will perform the inspection of two shipments of D568 on January 15th as requested. Please ensure they remain in good condition, both to be shipped by the end of February.
(Do you mean that after the inspection, there should be no changes or additions to the shipments - in which case you might say "Please ensure that the shipments remain in the same condition prior to them being shippe
(Do you mean that after the inspection, there should be no changes or additions to the shipments - in which case you might say "Please ensure that the shipments remain in the same condition prior to them being shippe
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