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Further to our conversation, we note there is an improvement for RD783 you suggested in the future order. Please send the sample to our product manager Mr. Chan for his approval for any changed.
  

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Further to our conversation, we note there is an improvement in RD783 that you suggested for future orders . Please send a sample to our product manager, Mr. Chan, for his approval for any changes.

  • Further to our conversation, we note there is an improvement in RD783 that you suggested for future orders .
  • Please send a sample to our product manager, Mr.
  • Chan, for his approval for any changes.
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Further to our conversation, we note there is an improvement in RD783 that you suggested for future orders. Please send a sample to our product manager, Mr. Chan, for his approval for any changes.
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