0
Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Judaism that everyone thinks everyone should talk about, get along with the practitioners thereof, and not dare to make fun of, is the best religion in the world.
  

Top answer

The grammar is fine, but do you realize that the way you put it, you're talking about a particular kind of Judaism? It makes the reader think, "Well, what are the other kinds of Judaism? " I don't think that was your intent.

— CalifJim

  • The grammar is fine, but do you realize that the way you put it, you're talking about a particular kind of Judaism?
  • It makes the reader think, "Well, what are the other kinds of Judaism?
  • " I don't think that was your intent.
  • CJ
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
The grammar is fine, but do you realize that the way you put it, you're talking about a particular kind of Judaism? It makes the reader think, "Well, what are the other kinds of Judaism? Why isn't one of them the best?" I don't think that was your intent.
CJ
0

Related Questions