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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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is this sentence correct?
Christine advised that Holman agreed changed the payment term to L/C. Would you please advise the date of your agreement or you prefer reply him by yourself. Please advise.
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It is very difficult to understand what you mean. It would help if you did not use the general verb "advise" so much. Also, make the direct and indirect objects explicit.
- It is very difficult to understand what you mean.
- It would help if you did not use the general verb "advise" so much.
- Also, make the direct and indirect objects explicit.
- For example: Christine told me that Holman had agreed to change the payment term to L/C.
- Would you please respond to me with the date of (the agreement or the date you agreed to the change; it is not clear what agreement you are talking about) ?
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It is very difficult to understand what you mean. It would help if you did not use the general verb "advise" so much. Also, make the direct and indirect objects explicit. For example:
Christine told me that Holman had agreed to change the payment term to L/C.
Would you please respond to me with the date of (the agreement or the date you agreed to the change; it is not clear what agreement
Christine told me that Holman had agreed to change the payment term to L/C.
Would you please respond to me with the date of (the agreement or the date you agreed to the change; it is not clear what agreement
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