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Our product manager Mr. Wong and his team will perform the online inspection on July 23 for HX2330, please ensure there is at least 10% completed goods with full packing ready for inspection. And we will inspection the other one model RD2323 at the same day, please note.
  

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Our Product Manager Mr. Wong and his team will perform the online inspection for HX2330 on July 23 , so please ensure there are at least 10% completed goods with full packing ready for inspection. And we will inspect the other model , RD2323, on the same day, please note.

  • Our Product Manager Mr.
  • Wong and his team will perform the online inspection for HX2330 on July 23 , so please ensure there are at least 10% completed goods with full packing ready for inspection.
  • And we will inspect the other model , RD2323, on the same day, please note.
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Our Product Manager Mr. Wong and his team will perform the online inspection for HX2330 on July 23, so please ensure there are at least 10% completed goods with full packing ready for inspection. And we will inspect the other model, RD2323, on the same day, please note.

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