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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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is this sentence correct?

0 01b00Since tolerating hunger takes so much effort, this tendency therefore makes an excellent phenomenon for exploring the dynamics of self-control02b00.02br
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00Is the sentence above a grammatically correct sentence? 02br
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0Yes, but 01i 00tendency02i 00 is an inappropriate word choice; also, 01i 00since02i 00 and 01i 00therefore02i 00 are redundant; and the sentence is rather overblown. 02br 02br 02b 00 0-

  • 0Yes, but 01i 00tendency02i 00 is an inappropriate word choice; also, 01i 00since02i 00 and 01i 00therefore02i 00 are redundant; and the sentence is rather overblown.
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0Yes, but 01i00tendency02i00 is an inappropriate word choice; also, 01i00since02i00 and 01i00therefore02i00 are redundant; and the sentence is rather overblown. I suggest:02br
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01b00Since tolerating hunger takes so much effort, it is an excellent phenomenon for exploring the dynamics of self-con

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