Is this sentence correct?

Hi,

Christmas is about to arrive and we're going SHOPPING for the kids. Everyone is welcome to join us!

When - Saturday Nov/9 at 10AM(you're a bit late

Is there a reason that "SHOPPING" is in capital letters?

CliveHi,

Christmas is about to arrive and we're going SHOPPING for the kids. Everyone is welcome to join us!

When - Saturday Nov/9 at 10AM(you're a bit late

Idiomatically, we often "Christmas is coming." (At least in the U.S.) There is nothing at all grammatically wrong with "Christmas is about to arrive," but since we still aren't even at the first Sunday of advent, it's not really "about to arrive," which sound imminent.

(I'd say where you are going shopping. If you were going to the local Wal Mart, I'd pass, but if you were going to a mall

Thanks Grammar Geek!

I changed "is coming" instead of arrive. They should know where since we went there every year and no it's not WM, lol. Any more adjustment?

Thanks

Not grammatically - but as someone who has just started attending a new church myself, I wouldn't know where last year's expedition went to if I were new.

Have fun!

Thanks but I myself doesn't know the name of the place

I'm instered to see how you would write it besides the corrections

I tend to be wordy

Christmas is coming, but you've got all you're shopping done, right? (Okay, we'll wait while you stop l

LOL, I like it but it doens't say anything about shopping for the kids?

Okay - but you've got all your shopping for the kids done, right?