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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence correct?
The purpose of this research is to describe and analyze the attitudes of secondary high school students towards music activities in Hong Kong during the years of 2006-2008
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It's correct but long. I would break it into two sentences: The purpose of this research is to describe and analyze the attitudes of secondary high school students towards music activities. The research is to be conducted in Hong Kong during the years of 2006-2008.
- It's correct but long.
- I would break it into two sentences: The purpose of this research is to describe and analyze the attitudes of secondary high school students towards music activities.
- The research is to be conducted in Hong Kong during the years of 2006-2008.
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It's correct but long. 
I would break it into two sentences:
The purpose of this research
I would break it into two sentences:The purpose of this research
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If I may, I think rvw's rephrasing and the original sentence might not mean the same thing. I understand rvw's text as a research conducted in HK, or among HK students, but it could be about any kind of music. But the original sentence talks about the HK music activities.
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