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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Is This Sentence Constructed Properly?

Is this sentence constructed properly?

What Dave has created for the online job seeking and career management community is totally amazing.
  

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Hi, Is this sentence constructed properly? What Dave has created for the online job seeking and career management community is totally amazing. In a context where people would understand what is being discussed, it's fine.

  • Hi, Is this sentence constructed properly?
  • What Dave has created for the online job seeking and career management community is totally amazing.
  • In a context where people would understand what is being discussed, it's fine.
  • But to me, it's a bit confusing to pile up so many nouns as adjectives.
  • Here are just a couple of examples of my confusion.
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Hi,

Is this sentence constructed properly?

What Dave has created for the online job seeking and career management community is totally amazing.

In a context where people would understand what is being discussed, it's fine.
But to me, it's a bit confu

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