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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this sentence awkward? How should I rewrite this sentence?
Working in the HR department, from time to time I send out memo that concerns everyone in the company. I therefore request that I be granted the permission to send email to "All Staff".
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Well, you can certainly simplify it a bit: I sometimes send out memos from the HR Department that concern all our employees, so I would like to request permission to address emails to "All Staff".
- Well, you can certainly simplify it a bit: I sometimes send out memos from the HR Department that concern all our employees, so I would like to request permission to address emails to "All Staff".
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Well, you can certainly simplify it a bit:
I sometimes send out memos from the HR Department that concern all our employees, so I would like to request permission to address emails to "All Staff".
I sometimes send out memos from the HR Department that concern all our employees, so I would like to request permission to address emails to "All Staff".
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Compare the two for their differences: with my changes, I have tried to eliminate the problems.
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