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Kak Serwan Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Is this sentence appropriate please?
I successfully received your resume and you will be contacted when your resume matches the qualifications of the applied vacancy.
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Not quite appropriate: ‘when’ anticipates that the qualifications will change to fit the resume. )
- Not quite appropriate: ‘when’ anticipates that the qualifications will change to fit the resume.
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Not quite appropriate: ‘when’ anticipates that the qualifications will change to fit the resume.
“I successfully received your résumé and you will be contacted if your résumé matches the qualifications of the vacancy for which you have applied.”
(Instead of the underlined words, you could use ‘applied for’.)
“I successfully received your résumé and you will be contacted if your résumé matches the qualifications of the vacancy for which you have applied.”
(Instead of the underlined words, you could use ‘applied for’.)
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Kak SerwanI successfully received your resume and you will be contacted when your resume matches the qualifications of the applied vacancy.It does not make sense.
"When" implies that the specific position's requirements will change in the future.
If a company has a different vacancy, it will be posted as a different job opening, not the one that the p
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