Is this sentence appropriate?
Hello!
We are setting a new position statement for a company, which produces weekly agendas / planners.
I would like to ask, if it sounds reasonable and is it appropriate?
Here is the statement: "Arrange your days in style".
Also I would like to know, what would be the difference, if verb "arrange" would be changed to the "plan" or "shape"?
Your help would be highly appreciated!
Best regards,
Arnas
Top answer
Arnas Arrange your days in style. It sounds more like an advertisement and less like a position statement. "plan" sounds as good as "arrange".
- Arnas Arrange your days in style.
- It sounds more like an advertisement and less like a position statement.
- "plan" sounds as good as "arrange".
- "shape" doesn't sound as good to me.
- CJ
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ArnasArrange your days in style.
It sounds more like an advertisement and less like a position statement.
"plan" sounds as good as "arrange". "shape" doesn't sound as good to me.
CJ
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