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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence all worded in the best way, particularly the middle part?

Coiling himself around the throne in the Tower of the Stars in Silvanost, the elven capital city, Cyan whispered horrifying suggestions and nightmarish tales into Lorac’s ear.
  

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