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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Porthios demanded that Alhana leave and explained that his sole purpose in life was to lead a successful rebellion to reclaim Qualinesti from the enemies of the elves and then die an honorable death.
  

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cboutin3 and then to die an honorable death. A little clearer. It's needed for parallel construction: to lead - to die

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  • cboutin3 and then to die an honorable death.
  • A little clearer.
  • It's needed for parallel construction: to lead - to die
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cboutin3and then to die an honorable death.
A little clearer. It's needed for parallel construction: to lead - to die
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