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Yangn2003 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence all right?
The sentence "Quality creates value; innovation shapes the future" is the spirite of my current company, but I am not sure whether the gramer is OK. Can anybody check it for me,please? Thanks
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Hello, yang-- and welcome to English Forums. Your grammar and structure is correct, but a semicolon in a slogan is weak. I suggest: Quality creates value and i nnovation shapes the future.
- Hello, yang-- and welcome to English Forums.
- Your grammar and structure is correct, but a semicolon in a slogan is weak.
- I suggest: Quality creates value and i nnovation shapes the future.
- Quality creates value .
- I nnovation shapes the future.
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Hello, yang-- and welcome to English Forums.
Your grammar and structure is correct, but a semicolon in a slogan is weak. I suggest:
Quality creates value and innovation shapes the future.
Quality creates value. Innovation shapes the future.
Quality creates value – Innovation shapes the future.
Your grammar and structure is correct, but a semicolon in a slogan is weak. I suggest:
Quality creates value and innovation shapes the future.
Quality creates value. Innovation shapes the future.
Quality creates value – Innovation shapes the future.
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