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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence all properly corrected?
The Green Dragonarmy was first formed by Ariakas, but as the other four armies were also assembled across the time period of 332 AC to 340 AC, it was soon determined that Ariakas would oversee all five armies and that the Green Wing would require its own Dragon Highlord.
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It's fine, although "Dragon Army" should be two words, and consider replacing "determined" with "decided".
- It's fine, although "Dragon Army" should be two words, and consider replacing "determined" with "decided".
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It's fine, although "Dragon Army" should be two words, and consider replacing "determined" with "decided".
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