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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Geran’s actions upon his return prompted Sergen and Darsi Veruna, the head of the House Veruna holdings within the town, to discuss the problems that the swordmage could possibly cause in their secret plans for Hulburg in which Sergen would soon be the new harmach and House Veruna would become the most powerful merchant company in the Moonsea.
  

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Geran’s actions upon his return prompted Sergen and Darsi Veruna, the head of the House Veruna holdings in the town, to discuss the problems that the swordmage could cause in their secret plans for Hulburg, in which Sergen would soon be the new harmach and House Veruna would become the most powerful merchant company in the Moonsea.

  • Geran’s actions upon his return prompted Sergen and Darsi Veruna, the head of the House Veruna holdings in the town, to discuss the problems that the swordmage could cause in their secret plans for Hulburg, in which Sergen would soon be the new harmach and House Veruna would become the most powerful merchant company in the Moonsea.
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Geran’s actions upon his return prompted Sergen and Darsi Veruna, the head of the House Veruna holdings in the town, to discuss the problems that the swordmage could cause in their secret plans for Hulburg, in which Sergen would soon be the new harmach and House Veruna would become the most powerful merchant company in the Moonsea.

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