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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence acceptable?

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01b01font00(1)If government makes a active regulations and providies people with a strict safety education , children's disease caused by noxious environment can be prevented.02font02b02br
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01b01font00(2) Active government control and reinforcing safety education can protect children against disease caused by noxious environment.02font02b02br
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01b00Can No.2 be the simple way of expressing No.1 ?02b02br
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01b00Or would it be better to use just No.1 ?02b02br
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01b00And I even don't know whether (1) and (2) are grammaticl well-formed.02b0-
  

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02i 02br 02br 00 However, it may be trying to say too much all in one sentence. 02br 02br 00 CJ0-

— CalifJim

  • 02i 02br 02br 00 However, it may be trying to say too much all in one sentence.
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01i00Government sponsored education in matters of safety and vigorous enforcement of safety regulations can protect children from diseases caused by pollution.02i02br
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00 However, it may be trying to say too much all in one sentence. You might also consider breaking it into
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0Thank you so much, Calif Jim! 05002br
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00It's difficult to break it into two sentences for me. So I'd better use that one. 010id1
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