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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is this sentence a run on? If so, how can I fix it.
"He thinks of all the hours upon hours of cleaning every crack, crevice, and seam imaginable while sweating profusely in the jungle like atmosphere."
Is this a run-on? If so how can it be fixed?
Is this a run-on? If so how can it be fixed?
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He thinks of all the house that he spen t cleaning... jungle -- but then you lost me. The original wasn't wrong, but I think the italicized part added adds to the clarity.
- He thinks of all the house that he spen t cleaning...
- jungle -- but then you lost me.
- The original wasn't wrong, but I think the italicized part added adds to the clarity.
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He thinks of all the house that he spent cleaning... jungle -- but then you lost me. The original wasn't wrong, but I think the italicized part added adds to the clarity.
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