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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentece correct?

People visit there to get on a boat to watch whales play.

It has become new hobby.

thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

People go there to take a whale-watching boat. Whale-watching has become a popular hobby.

— Mister Micawber

  • People go there to take a whale-watching boat.
  • Whale-watching has become a popular hobby.
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People go there to take a whale-watching boat. Whale-watching has become a popular hobby.
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So...

"People visit there" is not good or unnatural sentence?
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It is OK in some situations, I suppose, but it seems poor style in most. Usually, the location would be mentioned in the same sentence.
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"Usually, the location would be mentioned in the same sentence."

means

"People go to Australia to take a whale-wacthing boat."
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