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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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We are a local, private occupational therapy service who specialise in the assessment and recommendation of equipment and adaptations, to help you stay independent.
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If you want to keep it more formal, I would say: We are a local, private, occupational therapy service, which specializes in the assessment and the recommendation of both equipment and other adaptive methods to help our clients remain independent. Note, I am using the American spelling of specialize rather than the British specialise . I hope this helps.
- If you want to keep it more formal, I would say: We are a local, private, occupational therapy service, which specializes in the assessment and the recommendation of both equipment and other adaptive methods to help our clients remain independent.
- Note, I am using the American spelling of specialize rather than the British specialise .
- I hope this helps.
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If you want to keep it more formal, I would say:
We are a local, private, occupational therapy service, which specializes in the assessment and the recommendation of both equipment and other adaptive methods to help our clients remain independent.
Note, I am using the American spelling of specialize rather than the British specialise.
I hope this helps.
We are a local, private, occupational therapy service, which specializes in the assessment and the recommendation of both equipment and other adaptive methods to help our clients remain independent.
Note, I am using the American spelling of specialize rather than the British specialise.
I hope this helps.
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