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Checho Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentance correct
Hi guys,
can you please tell me whether this sentase is correct. It is support to be printed on a brochure for a hotel/restaurant:
"This property is the right place for a sojourn enjoyable to the refined taste and delicate senses."
can you please tell me whether this sentase is correct. It is support to be printed on a brochure for a hotel/restaurant:
"This property is the right place for a sojourn enjoyable to the refined taste and delicate senses."
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In English, it is a sorry mishmash of sentiment. Try something like this: [Restaurant name]—for a delightful evening of fine dining.
- In English, it is a sorry mishmash of sentiment.
- Try something like this: [Restaurant name]—for a delightful evening of fine dining.
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In English, it is a sorry mishmash of sentiment. Try something like this:
[Restaurant name]—for a delightful evening of fine dining.
[Restaurant name]—for a delightful evening of fine dining.
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checho can you please tell me whether this [ sentence] sentase is correct. It is [supposed] support to be printed on a brochure for a hotel/restaurant:
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I wanted something more "fancy" this is why "refined taste and delicate senses" were included, however, "sojourn" does not seem to fit in this case.
Perhaps something like: The restaurant is the right place to spend enjoyable time, satisfying the most refined taste and delicate senses.
What do you think?
Perhaps something like: The restaurant is the right place to spend enjoyable time, satisfying the most refined taste and delicate senses.
What do you think?
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chechoWhat do you think?I think you should use what I have given you—it is natural. Of course, if the readers of your brochure are not native English speakers, you may use any combination of words you wish; that is what the Japanese do.
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