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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this senetence grammatically correct?
Please let me know if this sentence is grammatically correct or not:
''I want to develop my skills in the processes of recruitment and selection, development and evaluation; and compensation and benefits that enable me to contribute positively to organizational and personal growth. ''
''I want to develop my skills in the processes of recruitment and selection, development and evaluation; and compensation and benefits that enable me to contribute positively to organizational and personal growth. ''
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Something is wrong with the overall flow of it. It seems that the semicolon could be wrong, but there may be other problems too, depending on what you are trying to say. I wonder whether you mean to include "compensation and benefits" as "processes"; I question whether they can be.
- Something is wrong with the overall flow of it.
- It seems that the semicolon could be wrong, but there may be other problems too, depending on what you are trying to say.
- I wonder whether you mean to include "compensation and benefits" as "processes"; I question whether they can be.
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Something is wrong with the overall flow of it. It seems that the semicolon could be wrong, but there may be other problems too, depending on what you are trying to say. I wonder whether you mean to include "compensation and benefits" as "processes"; I question whether they can be.
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